One day my dad and I went to the Canadian Tire Centre to watch a Senators game. My dad and I got to our seats. It was very close to the ice. I could see all the players. First I a little girl going up to a man that works there and said”Can I have a puck please?” The man said “Yes,you can have a puck.” After, I went up to the man and asked him “Can I please have a puck sir?” Then he said”I don’t have anymore, I am very sorry.” Then I went back to my seats and told my dad “He didn’t have anymore pucks.” My dad said “Oh well.” After a little the man was looking around,then he spotted my dad and told him to come over. So when the period as over my dad I went over to the man. He passed the puck through the glasse and gave the puck to me. Then ,my dad and I said “Thank you.” Then my dad I went up the stairs. My dad and I was so excited about the puck. We were so happy. After we went home.
In Writing we are practising a strategy for coming up with ideas to write about. It involves choosing a person who matters to us, remembering a few clear, small moments, and sketching it. The next step will be turning it into a paragraph with more details.
Here’s what Aysia did: